Disenchanted, I love no more.if you don’t want to critique, please feel free to skip my little ramble below!
First, let me start by saying, I used a few experimental things as verbs (a while back, I remember *0hgravity
saying something about how nightmare ought to be a verb, too) so, please do not include that as a grammatical error. Do feel free to tell me, however, if you do not think it works in context.
Now, for the #theWrittenRevolution
: What were your favorite/ least favorite lines? Do you think this piece was paced and ended properly? Is it something you can relate to? What do you think the relevance is in the repetition of “I love”? Any other comments or critiques.
My critique on Black Leather Woman