This poem is probably one of the favorites I have ever read on deviantart. It's just so cool and poetic and awesome. I can't have a favorite line or whatever because it all goes so well together that it all is my favorite. [sorry if I'm not making much sense...it's 3:25 am here haha] This has a wonderful flow and very interesting choice of words...I like your vocabulary. It feels like some lines could have been common thoughts yet changed in a way that made them awesome.
For some reason... the reason is this that I am a bit weird... now having stated that... while you are choking on your tongue... you bit your lip raw... to stem the flow... that was from your eyes... but now diverts to your finger tips... and the main reason is the leaking brain which you taste on your choking tongue...?
Psh, I'll take your lack of a mouth over mine....this is amazing! Although is there a reason a period is on the second to last line, it makes the rhythm stutter...especially with and being the first word of the next line.