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Eclipsing

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I'd probably forge my whole heart, anew
if you only asked

but you're out of words, tonight
the stars are shining much too bright
unlike you've ever seen before
if you blink, you'll miss them
don't blink
you'll miss them

(you have already missed enough
to make you wonder what's really left)

your eyes are shining
reflections
of everything you hope to be—
so you cannot see me.

and sometimes I wish
you'd just shut your eyes
because they say resting
is the greatest relief

when you can sleep,
and let go of everything you've ever seen before
for something more

and something dark
because it's there, I stay
laying in wait
praying on a dream

praying on you

(I wonder that wishes
are a certain kind of religion
which just gives me
more grounds to be
faithless.)

but the stars are burning
too bright, tonight
you're lost in their shine
don't blink.
you'll miss me.

I think I wait for words that don't exist,
(if only you asked
    before I eclipsed)
One day, I'll be a supernova.
And you will all go blind.


I've never been that good at writing out how I feel.
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Ad-Kins's avatar
I wonder that wishes
are a certain kind of religion
which just gives me
more grounds to be
faithless.


Just brilliant.