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Glue Worn Away

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Gracefully fading-
Like a photograph in time,
Uncolored with age
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Endings resemble
What once were the beginnings:
Ongoing circuit
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E
Reminders linger-
Never to be found, but beg
Always to be known.
S
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Wishes with feathers
Anchored by reality
Yearn, but yet, fade
An Acrostic Haiku for [link] I would really love feedback. I don't do a lot of haikus, so I'm not sure if it has the right effect. To help me out, I use fade again in the last stanza as a throwback to the first: does that work well, or is it redundant? Thanks!
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