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He'll come by night, when memories
resurrect and dreams become real. He'll
steal the air from my lungs, again, and
replace it with promises of a better day.
The sky will open up and I will finally
drop into place.
(the sweetest love story for an insomniac)

He hides in the shallowest holes of my
brain, waiting, waiting- the best things
in life only come to those who've
never been given a chance.  

but
I'm falling apart, like all the worst clichés.
and my knees are bloodied, now, they
weren't built to pray. He said he'd come back
in the stories he carved in my palms.

(can you hear my heart tick? These
days are numbered)

the words he gave me died
and maybe I did, too
For :iconprideofpanem:'s song prompt. Written to: [link]

Beautiful song, raw and hopeful in the worst way.
(Sorry if I threw a little too much of myself in here, dear ^^)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:love: It's just so beautiful....
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:la: ohhhh you are so lovely! I'm honored you think so!
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
=D Lovely knows what lovely does~ that should make sense yet it doesn't...hm..
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjdkhfuewyt you are so adorable.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Writer
Same to you~ :glomp: Though, rather than adorable, I'd say pretty or beautiful or lovely or ALL THREE! =D
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PrideofPanem Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Zomfg. I love it<3 Words cannot express how much I love this. <3
Favourite line: The sky will open up and I will finally drop into place
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ohhh I'm so happy! I worried you might not >.< thank you so much, sweetheart!
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PrideofPanem Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
You're very welcome my dear <3
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