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it's come to this-- definitions
of memories and people and dreams
I’ll never know firsthand like reasons for living;
this realization that I
am a stagnant planet, lost
on its orbit home; this

search for a justification
to keep on breathing ocean
when my lungs won’t tolerate
salt. I woke today in the water

to angels swimming around my feet;
coral, pearlescent anchors dragging me
down, down, sweetly lullabying
about you, dear, and the day
the tides washed you away.

you are written in my skin
as much as the lies I live by
daily. you are the beautiful things:

the sun waking up in the morning, the
stars pitying at me as I try to fall asleep.
the watercolor sky sighing, the
virgin clouds crying, the last note

suiciding itself into silence.
these are the thoughts that come after goodbye
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vergilusphoenix Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:")... -watery eyes-
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: That last line.....gosh.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You caper beautifully with the imagery, yet the parting theme remains cohesive and self-contained. Your writing is one of the most amazing in this world.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I could easily say the same of you. You are still one of the biggest reasons I continue to write.
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MozartsNemesis Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
You'd think as a poet, i'd have all sorts of pretty words to tell you how wonderful this is. I don't. You've left me speechless.

"the sun waking up in the morning, the
stars pitying at me as I try to fall asleep.
the watercolor sky sighing, the
virgin clouds crying, the last note

suiciding itself into silence."

just wow. Frickin amazing.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahh :blush: you are always too kind to me
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MozartsNemesis Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
no such thing as too kind my dear. :) you are a brilliant poet and a tragically beautiful soul. I hope you get to feeling better soon. Just know there are people you've never met who adore and respect you greatly.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
i love watching you improve.
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