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I am not the dysfunctional light switch,
17 times a day on again off again but
I think sometimes I’m caught in the parallels of
my own distorted perception and I just see
a jagged world falling fast and
and

you are blue, the deep
cyan-scented thing of night I crave, blue.
beautiful bleeding blue who cries like
the breaking sky and sings like a summer night,

I am invisible, changing before your eyes.
nauseous regurgitation of every color
I’ve ever loved,

while these crystalline dreams tinted teal
cradle me to sleep
just let me ramble for a little maybe
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Cyan is such a charming word...Now, "cyan-scented thing of night I crave" <3

I also love how you increase the rhythm of your pieces with consonance :

"just see a jagged world falling fast"... "beautiful bleeding blue who cries like the breaking sky..."
I'm sorry, I'm really enjoying this :love:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i just adore the word cyan :love:

and thank you!
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stargirl2791 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is gorgeous!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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stargirl2791 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome! :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Writer
It's really kind of wonderful =)
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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v-espertine Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
i feel like you can only know these things intimately - that being so thanks so much for bringing them out from skin. you're really lovely. <3
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
and thank you so much for reading and understanding what i wanted to say <3 your comment makes me so happy.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
By all means, your ramblings are beautiful.
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