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she’s in love with a character who
never existed but in the labyrinth of her head:
a patchwork composition of beautiful, lengthy words
she’d heard in her catatonic state; coma living
day in and day out, reliant on the salvation
of a man made of foreign wishing
and imperfection and necessity – an ignorance
of the less than ideal perception of self she’d
come to fear, absention stained romantic to the point
where daydreams were a standard for survival

(real living is for the purposeful of heart,
he loves her in her sleep)
It's always easier to love someone who doesn't exist
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:+fav:

i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked. (link)

thank you,
:bow:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:la: oh my goodness! this is an absolute honor!
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So powerful, I got totally inspired by this.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow. thoroughly impressed, yes.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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flummo Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Writer
Lovelily (such a ticklish word) put, hun. And so very, very true. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much, darlin :heart:
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Curiositykilledthe Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
This is amazing this and all the others that you have written and I read! :P
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