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Subliminal

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there was something about the way his whispers
entwined around the vertebrae of her neck
and caught in her ragged throat
that was reminiscent of nights long ago:

a heavy sky incensed with fears
forgotten, and a boy with full moon
eyes. she blamed her starry stomach
when she gagged on innards, unaware that
she herself was actually

undigestible.
stale and forgotten,
lingering like a smoke cloud off the lips
of someone with nothing better to say.
This is uncharacteristically short for me. I was trying something new. Feel free to tell me if it works or not.
Inspired by the beautiful way *glossolalias manages to describe events, and the way ~melodysnow can always perfectly make the reader envy her words.
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This:

she herself was actually

undigestible.
stale and forgotten,
lingering like a smoke cloud off the lips
of someone with nothing better to say.</>

So, can I stop crying now? This is a beautiful poem. Painful, yes, but beautiful.