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I used to know a girl for
the hunger in her voice;
she spoke of something
more, worth
anchoring herself to
and sinking down
with

"I think
I'll drink away my memory, soon,
or pray for an Alzheimer-inspired
beginning, because
I can't keep waking up

on the wrong side of life"
experimenting with short poems

(i don't like my writing lately, that's why my work is few and far between, sorry for that)
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LightOverpowers58 Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
powerful words, dear...and this is a fine poem, you don't have to like your writing since we enjoy it enough for you. :)
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you're sweet :heart:
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LightOverpowers58 Aug 17, 2013  Student Writer
Nah, not really :heart:
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haphazardmelody Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Such a sad poem. Really beautiful too. :+fav:
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intricately-ordinary Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :heart:
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UntamedUnwanted Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You talented talented lady!! I love this! :)
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intricately-ordinary Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: goodness, thank you so much!
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DogmaticKerr Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tragedy is tragic and tragic women utterly break my heart :heart: 

PS, I love your words and any-length poems.
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DogmaticKerr Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:worship: :love:
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