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ENGLISH LANGUAGE by lombregrise

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I wrote you a poem.

skeleton smile-- moonbeams
drip from your unharnessed
habilitations; you speak and
ravens tear through your throat
(I will be there) you are
a catalyst whose ghost eyes
died for a better day

ii
unaware promise bearer, take
me away. as you live these
beautiful vanities, take me
away

somewhere refined and romantic
like the lies you languish, where
a heavy heart weighs up to
something nice

iii
primed and pruned, I am
a seedling: an exaltation to
all that is you

we both cry the same kind
of quiet, and whisper the same brand
of please-don’t-listen-close; I
just want to leave before I break
when you [do it first] decide there is
a life worth more than the scars
I bear (though I mostly want to ask

does it ever go away?)

iv
churning repetitions of an
unmentioned time, I carry you
within my mouth; tucked away and
slowly disintegrating the things
I barely speak:

(you saw more of me than either of us
could admit) the time for letting go
has passed me by
Each section is something I'll never be able to tell someone in my life.

I may do this again. It was passive aggressive therapeutic.
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Vallestin Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
O beautiful obscurity
However deep you speak to me
I cannot fathom your abyss
Of radiant permissiveness 

I love this 

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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU
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hnchatham7 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
i can relate to the words. i feel them as if they were speaking to my soul. thank you for sharing your beautiful words.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for your praise <3
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hnchatham7 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
you are very welcome.
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hnchatham7 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
there are no words for this. other than breathtaking.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're too kind :heart:
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j-uyen3 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDJKLFHJL I never commented on your work before because I fear I'm too stupid to say something as meaningful as all the others who comment, and I'll sadly admit that half the time I don't entirely understand all the vocabulary (LOL I sound stupid). But, I do read all your work that you've posted ever since I watched you on dA and I felt the need to say that I LOVEEE THIS. SO MUCH. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh gosh that's way too kind ;u; you never have to be afraid to comment, haha, no one is going to judge you. And thank you so so much!
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j-uyen3 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha I know but in the end I still feel awkward about commenting sometimes. xD
You're welcome!!! :la:
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