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I'm ready for a romance to ravage my heart and tear apart my
dusty limbs, I'm waiting for someone to take my breath and
never give it back; I'm prepared to sell all I was for a trip
somewhere new - beyond the paper mistakes I sailed away
down the river long ago. (even rocks and leaden thoughts
won't let the truth sink.)

I left my being somewhere under a waning summer sun
when the trees hummed melodies of moving on;
my soul still stays there, porous and pining and
lost. Dying stars don't lead home.

I suppose
it's more than just losing
your words, it's losing
you

too.

I am someone who mourns Sunday morning for another lost
week. I am weak, I am of mice and the men who cower
beneath compromisable truths. I have already
made more mistakes than loose fingers in
two days and a little breathing room.
I am not special. I am the worst
kind of normal, and further
more, I am sorry.
I am me.
Hello 2013.

(ramblings and a little too much truth)

:iconglory-be-project:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That last stanza :heart: so painfully yet refreshingly honest.

(but you are special!!)
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:

and :blush: thank you again!
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   General Artist
SO. MUCH. LOVE. for this piece, for your talent and most of all, for you! :love:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're such a sweetheart! My goodness, thank you! :love:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013   General Artist
I'm nowhere near as kind-hearted as you, though. Seriously, the pleasure is all mine. :tighthug:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! I am going to agree with the majority of comments I read and say that the last stanza could definitely stand on its own as a poem. This is really, really good.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so honored to hear that! Thank you very much!
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How very beautiful, Maddie.

And I must echo the sentiments of the other commenters: I am glad you are you. Just the way you are. B-)
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: thank you so much! That means the world :tighthug:
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