literature

a new day

Deviation Actions

intricately-ordinary's avatar
Published:
359 Views

Literature Text

let's keep it simple. let's just continue
to talk and share our mangled words, indulging
in those people and memories once
dead to us; let's pretend I'm really a
fabled treasure- because strength
only belongs to those who deserve it.
(you don't yet know
how worthless I am)

and there are things I cannot tell you
because
no one ever wants to hear
what you don't want to be; no one wants to know
you are deteriorating as the world absorbs
what it needs of you, and nothing more.

it wasn't just an accident
that stole my breath away,
it wasn't fate that tempted the stars
to all come tumbling down.

the path to your own degradation
isn't as romantic as promised.

let's keep it simple,
unlike all the other things that bring me
dreams like nightmares about having
to wake up again.

everyone has a breaking point-
I measure my time in lengths
of giving up.
I wrote this out 17 different ways.

Do you ever write and not know how much you've said is true?
© 2012 - 2024 intricately-ordinary
Comments13
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
MozartsNemesis's avatar
So hopefully i dont look like a creepy stalker, but I couldnt sit here and wonder how many awesome poems I havent read by you. This is amazing.. just perfect.

Fave line:
"the path to your own degradation
isn't as romantic as promised."

also the last stanza is fantastic,