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it is a snake
coiled in my stomach,
the urge to vomit
everything inside of me, to purge
all the toxic not-
good-enoughs. to retell
the same story and expect
a different ending is
the dysfunction that landed
us in here. I'm sorry
I don't follow you into
your dreams at night. I'm sorry
my smile is not the moon,
I'm sorry I did anything
to make you notice
me at all. no finger
down the throat could ever
take that
away.
READTHISYOU JUMP-TO-CONCLUSIONERS

when i get really horribly depressed i feel like i am going to vomit
this is an expression of that depression
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Writer
:heart: This is tragically gorgeous.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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zoefletcher Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh yes this smells all too familiar. gives me a lump in my throat just reading it! :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you~
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry you're feeling this way. :heart: I've been in this place, and you've expressed it perfectly.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much <3
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
Oh, honey... :tighthug:

But I just have to say, I love that title ^^; It's got a sad connotation but it's just... it's a perfect title.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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