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(the worst thing I’ve ever been
is an accident)

my words have no filter and I am
too many apologies bound
together by the stringent belief
tomorrow is worth more than today—

remember that summer when I was
beautiful? all covered in amber fog
and delivered like a dream. I was
a porcelain promise, a lavender
whisper, a breathtaking cancer,
and so many other precious things

I just want to go back to that
time where I was unmolded by
mistakes and words unsaid
(it was never you

I have spent too long trying
to drain out every tear from
the ocean, my love,

simple tasks are for the
weak of heart, it was
never you)

I am still beautiful at night:
a perfect collision on a road
going nowhere, (please

do me one last favor
and remember me.)
because sometimes I'm sorry is the same as goodbye.
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: you're amazing! thank you!
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, always, lovely!
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is... wow. You've done it again! Those first two stanzas are such an amazing hook and
"(please
do me one last favor
and remember me.)"
is such a perfect ending.

This is really impressive work.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are far too kind to me, thank you <3
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Unlikely. ;) You are welcome!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Writer
This is just beautiful.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Writer
So very welcome :heart:
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sirweston Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sh*t. I literally cannot comment coherently due to a massive surge of feelings. Eurgh, I think you did your job.
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