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you will love a woman
who uses the word
gossamer
too often. she will
diagnose dead artists' descents
into madness and laugh
too loudly at jokes
no one understands.
she will braid crowns of
flowers, she will write poems
in constellations, she will
try to walk like a dancer so
no one can hear her
leave. she will be
an ice sculpture, and when
she cries, you'll convince yourself
she's melting, she loves you, you've
changed her, you've
changed; she will wear you
like a comma, like
an incomplete thought,
like
a
pause
in her story, and
she will leave you wondering
what
you
did
wrong.
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:iconchipchinka:
Chipchinka Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
Yep!
You're the reason people like poetry.  Just sayin'.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awww :blush: thank you
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:iconchipchinka:
Chipchinka Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
You are most welcome!  I've been away from deviantArt for a long time and coming back and reading your stuff is a real treat.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014   General Artist
UGGH :tightug: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank youuuu :love:
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RiseandbeStronger Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Breath-taking! I love it from beginning to end. :heart:
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!
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:iconriseandbestronger:
RiseandbeStronger Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
like

pause
in her story, and 
she will leave you wondering
what 
you 
did 
wrong.
:heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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