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gossamer love

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you will love a woman
who uses the word
gossamer
too often. she will
diagnose dead artists' descents
into madness and laugh
too loudly at jokes
no one understands.
she will braid crowns of
flowers, she will write poems
in constellations, she will
try to walk like a dancer so
no one can hear her
leave. she will be
an ice sculpture, and when
she cries, you'll convince yourself
she's melting, she loves you, you've
changed her, you've
changed; she will wear you
like a comma, like
an incomplete thought,
like
a
pause
in her story, and
she will leave you wondering
what
you
did
wrong.
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PaperbackRevelations's avatar
Wow, the last part:

she will wear you
like a comma, like
an incomplete thought, 
like

pause
in her story, and 
she will leave you wondering
what 
you 
did 
wrong.

Absolutely incredible! :love: