Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconintricately-ordinary: More from intricately-ordinary


Featured in Collections

Literature by fluffy333

Words by Shoeborn

Literature by HazyDreamerNeko


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
October 29, 2013
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
2,813
Favourites
178 (who?)
Comments
61
×
I drown my conscience in
the holy water of my wrists,

I carve hearts from empty
paper for my galaxyboy
with stars written in his skin,

and I swallow moths to
muffle the emptiness and
help me fly away.
short, sweet, accurate
Add a Comment:
 
:iconpaintmethesunrise:
PaintMeTheSunrise Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I love it.
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
Reply
:iconrainyapplepie:
RainyApplePie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really moving. Don't know what to say now. Just... moving.
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
Reply
:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you were already beautiful, maddie. trust me.
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjhgvfcdsa i can't tell you how happy that made me <3 thank you
Reply
:iconbeyond-an-anomaly:
Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Very beautiful. I especially like the last stanza...(Swallow moths to fly away...whoa.)

Brief and beautiful. 'Tis gorgeous, I say. Gorgeous! :D

Nice work! :)

-BAA
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!
Reply
:iconbeyond-an-anomaly:
Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! :D
Reply
:icondannymechanist:
DannyMechanist Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
in my imagination ... disturbing ... otherwise a masterpiece as always *intricately-ordinary you delivered with this one ...
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
Reply
:icondannymechanist:
DannyMechanist Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
Reply
:iconflashfaux:
FlashFaux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
This is seriously beautiful 
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: wow, thank you!
Reply
:iconflashfaux:
FlashFaux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Youre so welcome ^^ I loved this
Reply
:iconvandalised:
vandalised Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you have a beautiful way with words.
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :love:
Reply
:iconstarrysky963:
starrysky963 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist
This is beautiful. You're a marvelous writer. Never stop. :heart:
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for the encouragement :heart:
Reply
:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
GORGEOUS. :heart:
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO, U
Reply
:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Writer
:iconwhomeplz:
Reply
:iconchinzapep:
ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!!
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!! :heart:
Reply
:iconchinzapep:
ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're so welcome! Your poetry is so inspiring to me; I know I'll be visiting your gallery very often to read your work! QuQ
Reply
:iconschneekrahe:
schneekrahe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is beautiful and you are beautiful and i love you so much 
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahhh i love you too you are the sweetest ever :love: i think about you all the time btw creepy comment time
Reply
:iconschneekrahe:
schneekrahe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3! yaaaay
also i'm??? kind of flattered actually whaaat i think about you a lot too though like wow 
Reply
:iconwriterinacave:
WriterInACave Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Stunning writing
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much
Reply
:iconwriterinacave:
WriterInACave Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
True talent should be praised.  And you definitely have talent
Reply
:iconmaironmatos:
maironmatos Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Beautifull!
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
Reply
:iconrema-alkhany:
Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
nice
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
Reply
:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're so lovely ugh thank you times a million
Reply
:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
Reply
:iconcarmalain7:
Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
All the love.
Reply
:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Best to share it, eh? :)
Reply
:iconcarmalain7:
Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Drown the world, Lili, drown the whole world! =D
Reply
:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:salute: Yessir! With reinforcements such a campaign is likely to succeed! 
Reply
:iconditie:
Ditie Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
um, wow... just, wow!
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
Reply
:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
Every. Single. Line. Honey, every part of you is stunning :huggle:
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: thank you so much
Reply
:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
My absolute pleasure :love:
Reply
:iconx12-1992:
X12-1992 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very good
Reply
:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
Reply
:iconx12-1992:
X12-1992 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
how have you been?
Reply
Add a Comment: