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I drown my conscience in
the holy water of my wrists,

I carve hearts from empty
paper for my galaxyboy
with stars written in his skin,

and I swallow moths to
muffle the emptiness and
help me fly away.
short, sweet, accurate
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PaintMeTheSunrise Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I love it.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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RainyApplePie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really moving. Don't know what to say now. Just... moving.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you were already beautiful, maddie. trust me.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjhgvfcdsa i can't tell you how happy that made me <3 thank you
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Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Very beautiful. I especially like the last stanza...(Swallow moths to fly away...whoa.)

Brief and beautiful. 'Tis gorgeous, I say. Gorgeous! :D

Nice work! :)

-BAA
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!
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Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! :D
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
in my imagination ... disturbing ... otherwise a masterpiece as always *intricately-ordinary you delivered with this one ...
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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FlashFaux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
This is seriously beautiful 
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: wow, thank you!
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FlashFaux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Youre so welcome ^^ I loved this
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vandalised Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you have a beautiful way with words.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :love:
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starrysky963 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist
This is beautiful. You're a marvelous writer. Never stop. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for the encouragement :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
GORGEOUS. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO, U
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Writer
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ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!! :heart:
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ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're so welcome! Your poetry is so inspiring to me; I know I'll be visiting your gallery very often to read your work! QuQ
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schneekrahe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is beautiful and you are beautiful and i love you so much 
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahhh i love you too you are the sweetest ever :love: i think about you all the time btw creepy comment time
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schneekrahe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3! yaaaay
also i'm??? kind of flattered actually whaaat i think about you a lot too though like wow 
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WriterInACave Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Stunning writing
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much
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WriterInACave Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
True talent should be praised.  And you definitely have talent
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maironmatos Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Beautifull!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
nice
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're so lovely ugh thank you times a million
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
All the love.
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Best to share it, eh? :)
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Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Drown the world, Lili, drown the whole world! =D
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:salute: Yessir! With reinforcements such a campaign is likely to succeed! 
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Ditie Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
um, wow... just, wow!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
Every. Single. Line. Honey, every part of you is stunning :huggle:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: thank you so much
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
My absolute pleasure :love:
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X12-1992 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very good
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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X12-1992 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
how have you been?
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