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I drown my conscience in
the holy water of my wrists,

I carve hearts from empty
paper for my galaxyboy
with stars written in his skin,

and I swallow moths to
muffle the emptiness and
help me fly away.
short, sweet, accurate
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PaintMeTheSunrise Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I love it.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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RainyApplePie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Really moving. Don't know what to say now. Just... moving.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you were already beautiful, maddie. trust me.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjhgvfcdsa i can't tell you how happy that made me <3 thank you
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Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Very beautiful. I especially like the last stanza...(Swallow moths to fly away...whoa.)

Brief and beautiful. 'Tis gorgeous, I say. Gorgeous! :D

Nice work! :)

-BAA
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!
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Beyond-An-Anomaly Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! :D
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
in my imagination ... disturbing ... otherwise a masterpiece as always *intricately-ordinary you delivered with this one ...
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