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she smells of smoke, tastes
of cheap dreams and cheaper makeup,
sounds like someone who's used
to giving; her eyes are two

glossy sunsets out of a few
trillion that have set before--
when she shuts them, no one

blinks.
(sometimes, i feel you
when i sleep, heavy on my
chest, with your combat boots
and eyelashes sharpened to daggers,

slicing your wrists open like
you finally won the war)

trying maybe failing short poems
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lombregrise Nov 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Hi! You're featured in the greyshadow's here: fav.me/d6sktzb - :rose:
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intricately-ordinary Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow, thank you! I can't wait to look more through all these beautiful pieces!
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PrussianPersephone Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now I got the song in my head thanks.

Fuckin' hell this is beautiful. Bootiful. Full of booty.
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
ahh sorry :heart: Thank you
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creativelycliche Oct 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Every poem you write leaves me breathless. Really good.
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
thank you so much!
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DrippingWords Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
:wow:
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ivorysinkshore Oct 12, 2013  Student Writer
The last stanza really makes this poem special. 
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