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baby boy grew up and
the thorns left his crown;
his sides cry red,

it scares me to hear the
same stories in his sighs.

he is the kind of poetic violent whose
words are like calculated anvils; he
dissipates between my bones and

my heart will burst, I swear it. I am
afraid of balloons and the imminent
explosion of my delicate monstrosity
rising through my throat and suffocating--
but it’s really beautiful

when he turns over and rubs the galaxies
congested within his eyes. I believe in
shooting stars and intoxicated nights and the
prickled promises intertwined between our
fingers, as I miscalculate how fragile I really am

it’s beautiful. the sun sets red
and the aftertaste of bile is of
the loveliest reminiscence,

“these things are never
yours” he croons so
sweet.
not going to specify who is who

(romantic love poetry is hard, okay)
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013   Writer
It's really beautiful.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're precious :huggle:
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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v-espertine Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
very sweet. <3
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*flails* are you really afraid of balloons? ;< i am
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ohmygoodness yes, absolutely terrified
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMG I'M NOT ALONE IN MY FEAR ANYMORE :squee:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
It feels like loving the wrong person and being unable to not love them... I would say it's from the point of view of the leper, and 'he' is the lamb, because... Just because a lamb looks innocent, doesn't mean it's pure, and the fragility of life, of being unable to 'have' because what you do 'have' prevents true attainment...
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your interpretations are lovely to read :heart:
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