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tonight I ask myself:
 where are you going with all these names
 in your pockets? syllables that taste
 unauthentic in the desperate American
 mouth.


    repression is a series of images


  golden streetlights
  blinking
  pedantically

    earthbound angels breathing
    flame, starving hands speaking
    in tongues, glazed eyes
    asking are you fucking okay

       pale skin becoming moonlight,
       reflecting and refracting and

  the quiet understatement
  of listless
  lips.
  mutual poison.
i'm working in images i'm trying something new

this is unnavigated territory
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autumn-spirit Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
wow..you're a genius. "pale skin becoming moonlight"-very romantic :)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery is really stunning.

I do want to say that "pale skin becoming moonlight" seems a little out of place here because it just reads as more...hmm, what's the word...[insert 2 minute pause here while thinking] cliche than the rest of the imagery you have here. Because the rest of it reads really unique and authentic. Just my two cents there though, take it or leave it. :)

Again, you're amazing and so is this.
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   Writer
unf. 
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely lovely. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this working in images. It's beautiful. 
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
good :love: it's something i want to experiment with more
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Cry0freeze Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Fantastic!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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